Changes made due to audience feedback

I decided to show a selection of people from my target audience my products to see what they thought about my work - commenting on positive and negative factors.

The comment that was most notable was concerning my magazine cover.
Both a student from my target audience focus group and a teacher commented that although my magazine cover was good, the font/colours that I use for my feature article should be slightly different to the other minor articles on the cover in order for it to stand out more.

They also suggested that I could add more articles to the bottom of my page in order for it to look more 'filled out' and professional.

I decided to make these changes as the feedback from my focus group and target audience is extremely important, so here is a 'before and after' image of my magazine cover:

I believe that having made these changes, my magazine does look slightly better, more aesthetically pleasing, and clearly more attractive to my target audience.